Asyiqin - Santi: Descriptive Writing 3

Asyiqin's Version:

Gems of multi-coloured rain gleamed as they flowed down the tinted glass of the church windows. The faded grey, fissured walls of the building blended in with the flourishing shrubs of ruby red, sapphire blue and amethyst purple flora surrounding it and the sparkling diamonds in the night sky.

Santi’s Version:

The tinted glass of the untainted sanctuary allowed the gentle sky to cry shedding its tears of spectrum onto it. The wrinkled walls of the church skinned itself with the bright, blooming buds – shone by the night’s twinkling eyes.